Notice

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Notice

Do you notice

Her haunted eyes

Her shaking hands

Do you notice

The bruises she hides

Her broken will

Do you notice

Her cry for help

Her whispered prayers 

Do you notice

She stands alone

She talks to no one

Or do you notice

Everyone around her

As she move like a ghost

Do you see her

Do you ever care

Or do you just not notice she even exists

11 Responses to “Notice”

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  4. EXCELLENTLY well writen

  5. No bad :), it’s I remember, to I come in handy

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